Second draft
Third Draft
The third draft is not really that noticeably different from draft 2 as it really only fixes editing mistakes present in the previous draft. nothing is added in terms of story or content. I wanted to make sure that there was no way an editing mistake would be present for the final draft, so this was a necessary step in completing my script.
Final Draft
The final draft builds on what came before. adding another 6 pages worth of script to really pad the runtime. mistakes are also fixed which were present in earlier drafts, such as on page 3 where Grant is supposed to be talking but his dialogue blends in with the action block making it impossible to see who was actually meant to say that particular line. The extra 6 pages added a few more scenes, such as the infiltration of the enemy trench and a scene where James briefs his squad on their upcoming assignment.
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